Monday, 19 November 2012

Proofreading Exercise


'The reason is because upstairs bars are relatively more concealed than those on the street.'


Correction: 
  1. The reason is upstairs bars are relatively more concealed than those on the street.
  2. It is because upstairs bars are relatively more concealed than those on the street.
Explanation:
The word 'because' is unnecessary. (http://www.masteringgrammar.com/2011/09/reason-is.html)

 

Wednesday, 14 November 2012