Friday, 25 May 2012

Making Comparisons


最近講過假如我們要說自己的職業是什麼,我們千萬不要說: 

My occupation is a lawyer/a teacher/a salesman, etc. 

我們應該說:

My occupation is that of a lawyer/a teacher/a salesman, etc. 

這又令我想起學生們常犯的另一個錯誤。他們經常會寫出像以下的句子:
 
The price of the yellow car is higher than the red car. 

錯在哪裡呢?錯誤在於我們把黃色車的價錢紅色車本身作比較。我們應該比較的是兩部車的價錢:

The price of the yellow car is higher than the price of the red car. 

現在句子算是正確了,但讀起來非常笨拙。解決方法就是用代名詞 "that" 去取代 "the price":

The price of the yellow car is higher than that of the red car. 

我們當然也可以說:

The yellow car is more expensive than the red car. 

但就千萬別說:

The price of the yellow car is more expensive than that of the red car. 

原因請看下面的鏈接:

http://grammarfun101.blogspot.com/2011/09/price-is-expensive-what.html

讓我們再多看幾個例子:

The weight of Peter is greater than that of Mary. (correct) 
Peter is heavier than Mary. (correct) 
The weight of Peter is greater than Mary. (wrong!) 
The weight of Peter is heavier than that of Mary. (wrong!) 

The height of Mount Everest is greater than that of Mount Fuji. (correct) 
Mount Everest is higher than Mount Fuji. (correct) 
The height of Mount Everest is greater than Mount Fuji. (wrong!) 
The height of Mount Everest is higher than that of Mount Fuji. (wrong!)

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